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You inhaled her
And exhaled me
Taking in deap slow breathes
But breathing out fast
When she holds you
You breathe her in
With each moan
Every time you say her name
You exhale me

In time back I filled your lungs
I was spreading
I was in your cells
I traveled into your muscles
I made your heart beat
With each beat you took more of me
You could feel me
I was in your being
I was part of you

I didn't mind
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Themoonofmyheart Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sometimes things that are part of us don't remain the same anymore and it's the same for the other person whom you are part of. things change and with that priorities and choices change as well. I so understand how difficult it had been to accept everything of that especially there is a doubt of being replaced. But it's all great in the end, the one doesn't stick to us is better away from us in our lives :)
Qita
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Writer
Hello! :wave:

I have used the wonderful title of your piece in poem for The Title Poem project!

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JustMeAndAPanda Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Student Writer
:huggle:
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darkhairedweirdo Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013   Writer
I think there's a typo at "It time back". If it isn't one, I apologize.
Apart from that I love this poem. Strong and yet so sad. It almost hurts reading it..and that's a good sign. Well done.
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JustMeAndAPanda Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It was a typo.
Thank you very much.
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darkhairedweirdo Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013   Writer
Ah okay. Sorry if I sounded like a total bi***, I didn't mean to. And you're welcome :)
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JustMeAndAPanda Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You didn't it was much appreciated.
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darkhairedweirdo Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013   Writer
That's good then :)
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